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Oops this is so late kajd but yeah that sounds pretty awesome :U She'd snoop around and probably would help him out if he needs it. Should this be threaded? uvu!

Don huh well. Alignment as in side? Like good or bad?

The girl blinked. "My... grandpa?" She spoke with an uneasy tone. Caudia looked puzzled, uncertain on what to say. In the end, after a couple of short seconds, she gave him a slow nod.

"I am alone. How... can I help you. Mister?"

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Hello, I’m Joselle, one of the mods of this forum.

We don’t have a history of declining applications but unfortunately, I have to say that we will not be accepting this application. There are a couple of vital errors that resulted to the declination of your application.

The first waving flag was from the layout of your application. There must have been some sort of miscommunication—or perhaps the application had so many codes that it became confusing. Under some other circumstances, this would have been forgiven, however the weight of the verdict lies heavily on the content of your application.

Secondly, you did not read the rules prior to completing the application. There are supposed to be five negative and positive traits in the personality section. Your app falls a little short on the pros, and most definitely lacks in the cons. In addition, there are supposed to be five points in Likes, Dislikes, and Fears. The reason we do this is to dissuade the conception of shallow characters. It is very hard to find any appeal in characters that lack personality.

Now, moving on to her history. To be very brief, she seems to have a pretty ‘Mary-sue’ background. That kind of archetype is mostly evident in Mei’s initial wealth and status, in the part of the apparent and violent tragedy, and in the fact that she became a “first-class bounty hunter”. I mean, eleven years, I suppose, is a generous amount for anyone to excel in if they practiced, but Mei was 9 years old for Pete’s sake. If she had quit school and from that point on lacked social interaction from the age of nine, Mei should not be so ‘poised’ as you described. On the contrary, her personality should be much, much different for it to be realistic. I mean, the apparent badassery that bloomed from such a 'princess' with a melodramatic childhood is very, very hard to take in without the proper explanation. Everyone was killed and Mei escaped with just a scratch—really? And then she became adopted and can kick ass now? I’m sorry, I just do not see much light in this from the very little works and descriptions you have given to us.

All in all, there is not enough substance in Taiwan’s character to make her believable or ‘in-character’. While she does wield the cheerful traits, everything else is pretty much a dead-end. The whole point of applying for a character is to make them believable, realistic, and unique with all of the charm of its actual country. With that said, I suggest that you should do a bit more research on Taiwan and touch up on your grammar and writing before you try again. Please message me if you wish to edit this application in case you still want to re-reserve Taiwan and try once more. You have until January 29th to reply.

Thank you.