Post by Worldie on Jan 8, 2016 1:12:31 GMT -8
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Welcome to TND. Your application has been accepted. So, first things first, as we've informed the Scotland: we would like it if you refrained from using Berwald's accent/speech tic too often (this for readability and accuracy, though I can't personally testify to how a Swedish accent sounds). Feel free to describe the fact that they have an accent in your app or posts, unless you feel like you absolutely need to use some sort of accent to convey distress or strong emotion. Rest assured, this is not your fault: we have not yet officially instated it as a rule, but it will eventually be applied universally. That said, I really love the way you've written Sweden here! Here he is precisely the teddy bear with a scary face that I like seeing him portrayed as, mainly because it's simply adorable. You've also tied in his backstory very well; obviously his experiences have very much shaped him as a person and affected the way he acts. In the end, Ber is just such a genuinely decent soul and I think we have a serious need for that. The name is Oxenstierna. Berwald Oxenstierna. |
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