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Post by Deleted on Jun 19, 2013 17:37:08 GMT -8
contrustive criticism and praise (if any) for the alluring monsieur francis bonnefoy
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Post by Deleted on Sept 27, 2013 19:45:24 GMT -8
Mona. Mona. Okay Mona.
Fffff I haven't even RPed with your France, but aahhhhhhh I have to comment here!
First off, I love you. I love all of your characters and your muses. Your France strikes me the most here (And your Mona, but I'll skip over her because you don't RP her here X3). Your personal headcannons of France are perfect. Seriously, you have nailed this character on the head so wonderfully that I can't believe I'm the first to comment on it. He's perfect. You're perfect. You don't make him out to be a perpetual rapist, but you haven't dived so far on the other side of that argument as to make him out of character. You have found the perfect middle ground. It's not even the middle ground sorry, it's France, and you've mastered him.
Not only do you have the whole sexiness and sex down perfect, but you just have a wonderful writing style. I've known you for a very long time, and while we haven't RPed directly, I've followed your threads. I've been your admin, your friend, and your 'secret supervisor' if you will, and I have to say that your writing style has grown and improved so much through the years (man it's so weird to say years, but I guess it has been!). Your level of detail is incredible and your posts have been getting progressively longer and having lost quality at all. Seriously, I remember you saying that you couldn't write long posts and that you felt bad about not writing as much as some of the other RPers, and then you went and hit Wordmaster with a wonderful post! =).
And I know this isn't for your muse, but I think you are one of the sweetest people around and I always love talking to you when I can. You're one of the best kinds of people and I never want you to stop being you, alright? I hope you have a good weekend <3
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Post by Deleted on Oct 11, 2013 12:41:21 GMT -8
Okay okay okay! I just have to post here for Francis because asdfghjklasdfghjklasdfghjkl! Francis is... I cannot even find a word to express my emotions for this character! :'D Francis is such a beautiful character that he really causes my heart to bleed for him! WHY THE HELL HAS HE GONE THROUGH SO MUCH HEARTBREAK?! D8 A guy like him does not deserve it!!
Chels, ma loveleh wifeh, you know how much I adore you, your writing, RP-ing with you. And your Francis, I have to say, is probably one of my favourites out of your muses. It's so great that you never make him a rapist pervert; just an affectionate man who sees beauty in love and tries to capture that. He's so gentle, so kind, it's hard not to fall in love with him when reading all the lovely posts you write for him. I swear I am not stalking your threads... >>
In short, Francis = <3
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Post by frou on Nov 25, 2014 20:27:19 GMT -8
Can I have a moment to tell you how great your Francis is?
Not only does he go against every bad depiction against him ever, Francis is one of the most well-developed France muses I've ever interacted with. I have interacted with a ton of France rpers and depictions waver and sway from one extreme to another. BUT YOURS, your precious Francis, is at this great center. He's a lover, a man that goes against the stereotypes of masculinity, of snobbery, and vanity that so often is attributed with France.
Romance is his forte, but he does it in such a human way that positively AND negatively affects him. You don't know how stoked I am about that oh my god. People always focus and tunnel-vision on the most positive traits and let that radiate around their character--but non, not entirely with your case. Because of Francis' strong devotion to love and his emotions, he has gotten hurt. Hurt, but his resolve has been strong. Mona you've put so much strength in Francis, and it is in ways of such complexity people can hardly pull off well.
Given France's history, there a lot of back-up to your characterization. People also like to focus on all of the war-torn events and bloody massacres, but I want to think that all of this violence has made France the nation tired of it. That's why it's so refreshing to see Francis as this kind of man, and despite all of the pain he has harbored within him, he gives love, charm, friends, and kindness a chance. It pleases me that Francis has Madeline as his daughter, and he will make a wonderful father. Hopefully, Madeline can be his beacon of support and that constant reminder that a rose can grow in the battlefield.
That got really poetic but tl;dr please continue to let us bask in Francis' presence thank you
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