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Post by Asunara Wisdom on Mar 14, 2013 16:03:43 GMT -8
Paddington Academy is a secondary school here in Westminster. It was opened a couple decades ago by Princess Anna. Children of the ages 11 to 18 attend this school. Paddington will give your children the best English education possible.
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Post by Asunara Wisdom on Mar 11, 2013 15:30:35 GMT -8
@ Icy: OH YES WE MUST PLOT.  @ Mona: We will be... Oh yes, Allies thread. Yessssss. @ Bee:  @ Amy: YESSSSSS. |
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Post by Asunara Wisdom on Mar 10, 2013 15:59:45 GMT -8
Nah for Johanna. No for Cerys (but I know you Amy e ue). No for Natalya ahaha
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Post by Asunara Wisdom on Mar 9, 2013 18:04:33 GMT -8
| [atrb=border,0,true][atrb=cellspacing,0,true][atrb=cellpadding,5,true][atrb=style, width: 470px; margin-top: 20px, true] PENDING | [rs=2] | [rs=3]GREETINGS FROM TOMORROW NEVER DIES YOUR PROFILE IS ON PENDING. | | | I really don't enjoy writing these messages, mind you. I really don't. But, I gotta do what I gotta do. It's like going to the bathroom. You don't try to hold it in because... well, it gets messy and you risk getting hemorrhoids if you sit on the toilet seat for too long. Hemorrhoids aren't fun. So, we have a few concerns regarding your sheet. Your sheet has done the bare minimum... well, that's the blunt way to put it. So, here are the points we want to actually get to. - Personality: The traits are very, very basic and they could be expanded to seem more "real"... I can't see Viktoria as a real person, she is just a bit too one-dimensional... I would like her to have some conflicting traits, as real people have traits that conflict with each other. An example would be a young woman that wants to be independent but is dependent due to her position in society (don't use that example, please). You have her basic personality down. Expand from there. Some traits that I am a bit iffy on are "open-minded", "sassy", and "regretful". I imagine she would be a bit closed-minded in reality because of her being logical, and that there is a bit of inflexibility with what she will accept. I also wouldn't describe a Norway as 'sassy' at all... Perhaps it was a misunderstanding, but Norway is blunt, not sassy. Blunt would mean stating things for what they are, not really "speaking your mind". Sassy is a whole other level and wouldn't work with someone who is logical, as logical people calculate every word they say. Sassy would also invoke the sense of impulsive, which I doubt she would be. Regretful isn't exactly a trait, rather, it is a feeling. You can say melancholic or nostalgic, though, melancholic being the negative connotation of nostalgic. - Likes: You really could expand on this. Give reasons as to why she likes things. The things you like can reveal a lot about your personality. Make her like something that you believe people wouldn't expect her to like, like soap operas and mayonnaise? - Backstory: Hmmm... Well, I feel like you could have done so much more with this. I really don't think a Psychologist could become an Agent that easily. I would think it would put her on the Researcher track. Do talk a bit more about her adult life as well. Once you address though three points and modify your app accordingly, do tell us and we will re-review your app. Understand that we have had to think this through clearly and that this is only to improve the quality of the RPing experience here on TND. Do not be afraid to contact me or any of the other staff members regarding our decision to put your app on pending. - TND STAFF |
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Post by Asunara Wisdom on Mar 6, 2013 19:08:00 GMT -8
MOD - ROSALINDE JAKOBS "Ahhh, you're the man, I see... Well, I suppose you can come into the back room, we really need all the help we can get..." the woman said, motioning to the door marked "AUTHORIZED PERSONAL ONLY". |
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Post by Asunara Wisdom on Mar 6, 2013 16:13:31 GMT -8
| [atrb=border,0,true][atrb=cellspacing,0,true][atrb=cellpadding,5,true][atrb=style, width: 470px; margin-top: 20px, true] DENIED | [rs=2] | [rs=3]GREETINGS FROM TOMORROW NEVER DIES YOUR PROFILE HAS BEEN DENIED. | | | I apologize that I have to be the bearer of bad news, but your application has been denied. Through consensus of the staff, not my decision alone, you have been denied for several reasons. The biggest reason is his ego and the "princely" persona you have put out. It just isn't compatible with the AU and the logic behind it is a tad bit far-fetched. After all, the canon Liechtenstein's characteristics masculanized does not seem to be that way. When creating the Nyotalia persona, even if you do not want to be a copy of the original, you want to keep the essence, which you have so nicely done with your other Nyotalia characters. You do not see differences that are too radical, as presented here. But, you see the adding of some spice with the fact that those personality traits from the feminine version of a character would probably turn out different in the masculine version of the character.
However, the app isn't all that bad. Your character would be good if it were not Nyo!Liech. This would be a believable character if you tweaked it a bit more... as an original character for an original story. But because of the circumstances, we cannot accept this app.
I would have recommended putting more of a focus on the chivalry that Nyo!Liech could express. Chivalry is selflessness and bravery to do what is right, something that the feminine Liechtenstein could exhibit if pushed to the test. Because this Liechtenstein is masculine, you could have brought out chivalry and the true art of gentlemanship.
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Post by Asunara Wisdom on Mar 5, 2013 19:24:44 GMT -8
Wherever the amore takes us.
Itacest would be awesome, but let's see where the RP takes them, shall we?
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Post by Asunara Wisdom on Mar 5, 2013 18:57:08 GMT -8
He sat up in the bed and groaned.
Shit, I'm in a hospital bed.
Among the things that ran through his mind (hospital bills, sister, flowers, money, weapons), he couldn't help but feel guilty about the sister part.
How the hell am I here?
He turned his head towards the night stand. And sure enough, a bouquet of alpine roses and edelweiss were there. One does not simply misplace a lab. A large, mother flipping lab funded by the government.
Iain Stuart-Kirkland did. Kinda. Melinda simply did not feel like opening up that day. Melinda is quite a jealous little lab. She seemed like the joyful motherly type. Which she was if you didn't account for what she's witnessed before.
But this was probably a moment where joy wasn't a mask.
"Hermano?" Ludwig and Arthur don't do parties for several reasons. One reason being Michael. Another being how both of them have sticks up their asses. The third being their alcohol tolerances.
Arthur was coerced into drinking. Regrettable. It really wasn't a good idea.
Ludwig happened to enjoy his drink a little much. His wallet, not so much.
And Michael only laughed and took some questionable photos. Ahhh, lovely. She stayed by his side every single time. It was painful, seeing him cough and retch like that in bed with a fever. But as always, she would open her book and begin to read.
"The forest was like a jewel, sparkling in the distance. They say the dragons roam the forests and cliffs, waiting for that one pure person to come to them with the valiance to tame them. Only a true warrior, a true sword, an Excalibur would be able to be the master of them."
Ironic, he would become an Excalibur.
And she would be his shield, her arms around him, comforting him and shielding him from the yells and retorts.
If only that was how things worked. The stronghold can only remain strong for an amount of time. |
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Post by Asunara Wisdom on Mar 5, 2013 18:15:09 GMT -8
MOD - AGENT TACHIBANA It was rather frustrating trying to locate Ivanovna, but when she did, well... it wasn't great. Her eyes met the Slavic politician's glazed grey eyes. "You're next," a voice said through Tachibana's earpiece, transmitting straight to Collins. End transmission contact with Collins. Cue explosion on floor above, the ground shaking, and pieces of the ceiling falling, disturbing the soiree. Let's begin, shall we... |
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Post by Asunara Wisdom on Mar 5, 2013 17:19:03 GMT -8
As he held her close, his stern face seemed to soften, as if growing younger. She reminded him too much of her father, that same father that he wanted to punch in the gut a lot of the time, but... those eyes. Those eyes that were her mother's, those eyes that didn't just stare up at him, but stared right through him.
It was that unconditional love that he had for his sister... and now for this little girl.
“Vash, I used to think you’d beat me to it. You’re older than I am," his sister kidded. He stammered a bit... from what? From the fact that he was seeing someone at the moment? Nah, it couldn't be only that. It was just a tad bit overwhelming... to have family again. Living, breathing family. Of course, not in the blood sense, exactly, but family. And he vowed he wouldn't let this die away.
"What did you name her? A German name?"
"Nope. Her name is Aislinn. It means 'vision' in Irish Gaelic. We're hoping the next one will have a German name."
Ah, what a bright vision indeed. She seemed to be much more wrapped up in watching her siblings' love affairs. Or at least... lack of them. Donald and Iain were well off (or at least, she approved of Donald's relationship, Iain's was a bit iffy to look at). But of all things, she wasn't watching out for her own romance. She was grilling Arthur and Aoife about their love lives.
Arthur was married to his work.
Aoife was married to her masculinity.
She really should stop waiting on them. After all... let's not waste a pretty face.
They all agreed that she deserved a break from them so... Well, let's hope that forced blind date actually goes well. She was cold to the heart.
But frightened to the bone. She simply decided not to show it.
Her father scared her with his firm gaze and authoritarian lifestyle. Her mother scared her with her perfectionism and loveliness, as if Natalya would never become that way. Her sister scared her with her failures as a person. Her brother... he scared her the most. She was scared of falling more and more in love with him... because it always hurt hearing those rejections.
And now, the deepest of her fears was that desire she felt for another... why. Why did she have to go out for morning coffee and hit him with the damn cheap moped.
She was scared to see more. Oh dear suaveness, why are you so fake? Why do you always hide yourself in your fear and your glamour. Maybe that is why fratello seems to hate you so much. You aren't the person you used to be. You have changed.
He stopped knowing what was real and what was pretend. It was all an act, and they were all puppets on strings, guided by the artist and architect of a different dimension. He would merely do his job as an actor.
Put on that fake smile. Keep with your fake cares in the world. You don't need anyone to know. Simply be suave. He tapped the pencil on the counter as he scanned the balance book. Ahhh, those numbers, beautiful numbers, numbers he shouldn't contemplate, numbers that aren't meant to exist... but exist.
"Seems like another good month..." he muttered to himself. He looked at the pencil and sighed.
She wasn't going to be coming back into the kitchen anytime soon. How long would it be until these numbers convince her to come back. |
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Post by Asunara Wisdom on Mar 5, 2013 14:29:29 GMT -8
AH HE IS BEAUTIFUL //smack'd
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Post by Asunara Wisdom on Mar 5, 2013 6:47:31 GMT -8
A top of the line Chinese restaurant, you probably won't be seeing any better in London than here. Designed to look like a Chinese palace and even including an artificial stream, it appears very extravagant, but the food matches up to it. This restaurant is owned by the proud Mr. Yao Xun Wang and it will be worth your time. The food may be a tad bit expensive, but look at that hot waitress entertainment... you can't refuse that.
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Post by Asunara Wisdom on Feb 27, 2013 22:25:07 GMT -8
Yay, crappy housing that Vash doesn't live in //smack'd But yes, niceeeee, though you could have made it even tinier <333 //smack'd with the force of agents with crappy apartments |
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Post by Asunara Wisdom on Feb 23, 2013 17:34:20 GMT -8
I'll miss you papa ; A;/
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Post by Asunara Wisdom on Feb 23, 2013 16:17:03 GMT -8
Thank you for joining us, thanks for the fun times Pluto. We'll miss you ; A;/
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